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I'm trapped in a cruel world of death pain and strife,
of unbearable hurting, inescapable Life
where everything’s nothing, nothing’s what it seems
and not enough comfort comes from dying dreams

where Life taunts the lonely while Death haunts the brave,
and you’re only relief’s in a small unmarked grave
it’s an Earth where the tombs stretch as far as you see,
where love is a rare find and joy’s obsolete

the light turns to dark, and the sun can’t return,
the stars have all fled, and the moon has been burned
the people cry out for the mountains to fall
but Death has flown elsewhere, evading us all

now everyone’s fleeing, and I’m left alone
to bear the unbearable pain on my own

dear Lord, give me angel wings, away let me fly,
If not, I’m abandoned and left here to die
but angel wings only can fly just so far
before feathers start falling and the wings break apart

I’m falling, I’m falling down back to my death
no time for my last words no time for last breath
if only your Heavens were not beyond my grasp
but I can’t escape to them ‘til I fly at last

I sense the end coming, but I feel no fear
my angel has found me, my sweet relief’s near
and then I am peaceful, I now say goodbye
just lend me two angel wings so I can fly

Fly, fly away
©2004-2009 ~naiadgirl1012
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Author's Comments

Well...I wrote it forever ago and never really submitted it :P

It's kind of a song...but not really. More like a dirge, eh? Anyway, I've had massive writer's block for ages, and can't seem to write anything worth repeating, so I thought I'd dig through some old stuff, and this is what turned up. The usual doom and gloom, but with a sadder, sweeter undertone.

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:iconporlakresta:
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wowsa...
a great poem as always:D

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:iconisshinryukaratenut:
I remember this one...it is old. Still very very nice!

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"One heart, one mind."
:iconnaiadgirl1012:
Why thank you Claudia ^^

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There is always some madness in love. But there is also some reason in madness ~ Oscar Wilde
:iconshirausagichan:
I favorite it cause old or new it rocks mah socks =)

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:iconnaiadgirl1012:
YAY! Thankies Shira, you always know what to say ^^

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There is always some madness in love. But there is also some reason in madness ~ Oscar Wilde
:iconnaiadgirl1012:
Merci beaucoup, Vicky-san

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There is always some madness in love. But there is also some reason in madness ~ Oscar Wilde
:icondarkgoddess28:
I loved it then and I love it still now.

The rhythm is perfect
Your words move my heart... my soul I might even say. :)

I wish it were a song - I'd download it.... I mean buy your CD ;p and sing it constantly.
:iconnaiadgirl1012:
o.o I made it into a song but the tune was craptacular so I never like....did anything. With it. Yeah.

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There is always some madness in love. But there is also some reason in madness ~ Oscar Wilde
:icondarkgoddess28:
Hire a cheap freelance musician and have them do it :p or copywrite it and send it to Record Labels :p hehe

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